tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8886922.post114916801464295730..comments2007-04-15T23:49:21.522-07:00Dohhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05628511589687460686noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8886922.post-1149612406762700232006-06-06T09:46:00.000-07:002006-06-06T09:46:00.000-07:00Hey Bilbo thanks much ! :) ... i watch something and i just want to write and then language or grammar just is secondary .. But thanks much for keeping it honest :) <BR/>atra .. my handwriting unfortunately is not very good so it does not make for a clear picture. i will try other schemes to try and get it published in devanagri <BR/>Yes it is about riots.. communal or otherwise ...communal theme is the easiest to portrayDohhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16944746710846501859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8886922.post-1149594309229809292006-06-06T04:45:00.000-07:002006-06-06T04:45:00.000-07:00doh, why dont you write it in devnagri on paper, and then take a pic and paste it here, like vivek did for one of his poems?<BR/>Reading in devnagri is much easier than painstakingly mentally transliterating from english.<BR/>Poem does seem really nice - its got a lovely transportability to its becoming a song. <BR/>I also think i'd appreciate it more if you told me the context? is it communal riots?Atrakasyahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10282689643785117728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8886922.post-1149204711288798132006-06-01T16:31:00.000-07:002006-06-01T16:31:00.000-07:00Behta hua sarphiron ke sar se<BR/>Ik akhshar banata hua <BR/>Om hoga ? mera naam hoga ?<BR/>Junoon hoga ? mera desh hoga?<BR/><BR/>loved these lines. all though some how id look for equivalent words in urdu for akshar. I think akhar would do too. My too bits here. I some how dont like mixing languages. It kind of disrupts the harmony or the imagery of the thought. <BR/><BR/>I like these pome(s) of your'sbilbohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16324778684367886967noreply@blogger.com